To Soften Image, Brazilian Police Ride In Atop Horned Beasts
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학생 제출 원문
Though some people say Asian water buffalo is cut into only steak, there are other ways of explaining buffalo’s usefulness. Asian water buffalo provides humans with not only steak but also cheese from buffalo milk. Moreover, buffalo hauls garbage and run in parades and festivals. Water buffalo is a good swimmer. They are better than dogs. Also, buffalo is agile in mud swamp. They are faster than horses in mud. Furthermore, buffalo is friendly with humans. So it is easy to make use of buffalo in our lives. Buffalo is useful for riding so soldiers and policemen like to patrol with buffalo instead of riding vehicles. Especially, riding buffalo can reduce tensions when soldiers and policemen patrol dangerous areas. In summary, there are many reasons why people love buffalo and make use of them. It is not only because Asian water buffalo provides us steak and cheese, but also because they haul garbage, run in parades, swim well, move in mud fastly, and give a ride to us with friendly smile
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