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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 07. 20 조회 13248

last saturday at night

작성자: min018 담당 튜터: Verna
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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i went to wedding ceremeney in ma um with my firend`s daughter
the bride and groom were wearing black evening dress
so she looked really glamaours
but i never have been seen
bluck evening wedding dress
anyway she was very lovey and attractive
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i went to wedding ceremeney in ma um with my firend`s daughter the bride and groom were wearing black evening dress so she looked really glamaours but i never have been seen bluck evening wedding dress anyway she was very lovey and attractive

I went to a wedding ceremony in Ma um with my friend`s daughter. The bride and the groom were wearing black evening dress and the bride looked really glamorous. I have never seen black evening dress in a wedding but she was very lovely and attractive.

 

Study the nouns or pronouns that you need to change into big letter like I.

Start your sentences in big letter or capital letters, also the name of place( Maum ), it should be written into  big letter.

don`t forget the articles like "a".

Study the coordinating conjuction `and`  and `but`.

check the spelling of words

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