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Office telephoning

작성자: 119846 담당 튜터: Joselin1
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Title : Office telephoning

Hello. This is James.
Oh. As for the matter...
Actually I waited for your log in the company messanger.
Because you looked absent, I didn't call you.
First, you have to make a process of contract request.
After that, I can follow the after process.
You can find the contract request menu on the supply system.
Actually, I don't know the exact how to do on the menu.
You have to study the how to do. It may not be that complicate.
Oh. your senior already made that process? Who was the recipient?
튜터 교정 답변

Title : Office telephoning Hello. This is James. Oh. As for the matter... Actually I waited for your log in the company messanger. Because you looked absent, I didn't call you. First, you have to make a process of contract request. After that, I can follow the after process. You can find the contract request menu on the supply system. Actually, I don't know the exact how to do on the menu. You have to study the how to do. It may not be that complicate. Oh. your senior already made that process? Who was the recipient?

Office Telephoning.

Hello, this is James. Yes, regarding the matter...I actually waited for you to log in to the company messenger. It looked like you were absent so I didn't call you. First, you have to do a contract request. After that, I can follow through with the process. You can find the contract request menu on the supply system. I don't actually know how to do it on the menu. Please study how to do it. It's probably not that complicated. Oh okay, your senior already completed that process? Who was the recipient?

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