It’s hard for Koreans to say I’m sorry #6
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
It’s time to wrap up of my speech.
1. “I’m sorry.” doesn’t imply legal compensation, contrary to apology.
2. “I’m sorry” expresses just regret of speaker, not exactly consideration to others.
3. The word “sorry” is an adjective which express speaker’s uncomfortableness. So, we can use it having no consideration for moral responsibility.
4. Nevertheless, “I’m sorry.” conveys speaker’s regret and worriment to others, it would be good, if we use it frequently to anybody.
5. Saying “I’m sorry” just in time can get a trust from others.
6. Indifference or ignorance without saying “I’m sorry” can arise a displeasure or a bitter feeling for others, and this dry culture can make our society severer and colder.
I have a hope that we live in a warmhearted society by respecting each other.
1. “I’m sorry.” doesn’t imply legal compensation, contrary to apology.
2. “I’m sorry” expresses just regret of speaker, not exactly consideration to others.
3. The word “sorry” is an adjective which express speaker’s uncomfortableness. So, we can use it having no consideration for moral responsibility.
4. Nevertheless, “I’m sorry.” conveys speaker’s regret and worriment to others, it would be good, if we use it frequently to anybody.
5. Saying “I’m sorry” just in time can get a trust from others.
6. Indifference or ignorance without saying “I’m sorry” can arise a displeasure or a bitter feeling for others, and this dry culture can make our society severer and colder.
I have a hope that we live in a warmhearted society by respecting each other.
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