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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 07. 23 조회 12975

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작성자: 1200510 담당 튜터: Kyla
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. The typoon has come every july and augist in korea

2. Many accident such as floods and landslide has caused in this period
튜터 교정 답변

1. The typoon has come every july and augist in korea

- The typhoon comes in  every month of July and August .

 

2. Many accident such as floods and landslide has caused in this period

 

- Many accident happened during this month of July and August due of typhoon. There are some disaster happened such as floods and landslides.

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