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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 08. 02 조회 13217

Getting along well with my wife

작성자: pos601974 담당 튜터: JoeM1
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My wife complained me I’m not careful on housework. Although I contribute to some degree, something is insufficient while I’m doing on housework, she said.
For example, I usually clean up a living room and arrange books and toys. However, I don’t get rid of used water in the bath tub because I’m not sure if my wife re-uses the water. I’m insensitive, so I want my wife keeps telling me what’s wrong with me. But she said it’s irritating her because she feels like keep nagging me. She complained it’s improper to point out what’s wrong with a matured person. That’s why she hopes me to do what is right by myself.
I know I can’t totally change myself. So I’ll try to make ongoing progress as focusing on what my wife especially dislike among my behaviors such as being late or wearing clothes loosely. Moreover, I will try to communicate with her to find what she feels like in our daily life and what her problem is for making our family happy.
튜터 교정 답변

My wife complained to me that I’m not very careful with on housework. Although I contribute to some degree, something she says it is insufficient. while I’m doing on housework, she said. For example, I usually clean up a the living room and arrange the books and toys. However, I don’t get rid of used water in the bath tub because I’m not sure if my wife re-uses the water. I’m insensitive, or so I want my wife keeps telling me. what’s wrong with me. But she said it’s irritating her because she feels like she must keep nagging me. She complained it’s improper to point out what’s wrong with a matured person. That’s why she hopes I me to will do what is right. by myself. I know I can’t totally change myself. So I’ll try to make ongoing progress like as focusing on what my wife especially dislikes among about my behaviors such as being late or wearing clothes loosely. Moreover, I will try to communicate with her to find out how what she feels like in her our daily life and what will make her problem is for making our family happy.

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