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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 08. 04 조회 11608

I cannot play basketball.

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I cannot play basketball, because my co-workers have not played basketball.
I don't understand them. They have played Soccerr and Jokgu(Korea treditional sports) almost everyday. Sometime, I want to play basketball very much, but I cannot play it. I'm so sad. So, I found other players who are other company workers. I said them, "whenever i can play basketball. if you want to play it, Just call me." But, they have not called me until now. I beleve that they find me to play basketball.
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I cannot play basketball because my co-workers do not play basketball. I don't understand them. They play Soccerr and Jokgu(Korea traditional sports) almost everyday. Sometimes I want to play basketball so much, but I cannot . I'm so sad. So, I found other players who are workers from other company . I said them, "whenever you want to play basketball, just call me." But they have not called me until now.  I think that they were trying to find me to play basketball.

 

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T. MAdie

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