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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 08. 06 조회 12738

resort, vacation, packing, luxury

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resort
In Jeju island, the prices around the beach are very high but it is a nice resort for sure.

vacation
Two years ago I went to Jeju island with my friend for my Summer vacation.

packing
I'm planning on packing my bags about a month later.

luxury
Staying at a hotel is very luxury so I prefer to a guest house.
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resort On Jeju island, the prices around the beach are very high, but it is a nice resort for sure. vacation Two years ago I went to Jeju island with my friend for my Summer vacation. packing I'm planning on packing my bags about a month from now. luxury Staying at a hotel is very luxurious, so I prefer going to a guest house.

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