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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 08. 06 조회 12927

My favorite author

작성자: 1102277438 담당 튜터: Madie
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My goal for this year is to read a book monthly. I don'y have enough time because I read a book during my lunch break. Lately, I have been reading a book that is Goguryeo. Goguryeo has been established since B.C 37. Thus, Goguryeo is Korean history book. This book's author is Kim Jin-myung. He is very famous a novelist in Korea. There are a lot of books that he wrote. I love his books. Therefore, my favorite author is Kim Jin-myung.
You said, I don't have enough time to read book, but you like to read books. What is your favorite author? and What is most interest book of your favorite author?
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My goal for this year is to read a book monthly. I don't have enough time because I read  books during my lunch break. Lately, I have been reading a book about Goguryeo. Goguryeo has been established since B.C 37. Thus, Goguryeo is about Korean history book. This book's author is Kim Jin-myung. He is a very famous  novelist in Korea. There are a lot of books that he wrote. I love his books. Therefore, my favorite author is Kim Jin-myung. You said, I don't have enough time to read book, but you like to read books. Who is your favorite author?  What is most interesting book of your favorite author?

Hi!

Thank you so much for showing interest to learn. Reading is a very good habit and the best motivation  to   become better in English. About my favorite author? I use to read sself help books. Are you familiar with "Chicken Soup of the Soul" I love all of its stories. It talks about  family,love, relationship, friendship, home and it even about pets. For me its a book about spiritual growth and self improvement.

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