I was in vacation last week.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I was in vacation during seven days; august 10th to 16th. I will translate my job three month later.
So, I went to the city that is at my new company in order to find my new house. the new city is made me angry because the people that are in there are NOT kind and trust. For example, i wanted to stay in accomodations that are a hotel, a model, and so on. But they didn't take our room because of my baby. When i said " two people stay there", he said "It's okay! come here.". When i said "I have a baby nine months", ha said " Oh! you cannot stay here because this room is very small.". I was too angry. Why did we stay here? nine months baby needs very small place. So, we could not get our room. Thus, we came back in changwon. I was too tired beacuse I've driven about 4 hours. I don't want to move the new city. I rethink that we move the new cith and translate my new job. I will find another company and job.
So, I went to the city that is at my new company in order to find my new house. the new city is made me angry because the people that are in there are NOT kind and trust. For example, i wanted to stay in accomodations that are a hotel, a model, and so on. But they didn't take our room because of my baby. When i said " two people stay there", he said "It's okay! come here.". When i said "I have a baby nine months", ha said " Oh! you cannot stay here because this room is very small.". I was too angry. Why did we stay here? nine months baby needs very small place. So, we could not get our room. Thus, we came back in changwon. I was too tired beacuse I've driven about 4 hours. I don't want to move the new city. I rethink that we move the new cith and translate my new job. I will find another company and job.
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