bicycle riding fatigue
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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Title : Bicycle riding fatigue
I rode a bicycle with coworkers include my boss last weekend.
Our party was three. We were planned to ride a bicycle from Han river park to Ara canal.
So I woke up at 4 o'clock AM on sunday and drove to the start point, Han river park.
My boss is expirienced person, but I didn't consider it that so much.
Because he is much more older than me, and I thought I was goot at sports.
But I realized that I was wrong. I couldn't follow my boss even though he drove his bicycle slowly and smoothly. After some time passed, I couldn't see his appearance. He stopped his bicycle and waited me. It was a shame to me.
After our riding, I could narrowly come home.
I rode a bicycle with coworkers include my boss last weekend.
Our party was three. We were planned to ride a bicycle from Han river park to Ara canal.
So I woke up at 4 o'clock AM on sunday and drove to the start point, Han river park.
My boss is expirienced person, but I didn't consider it that so much.
Because he is much more older than me, and I thought I was goot at sports.
But I realized that I was wrong. I couldn't follow my boss even though he drove his bicycle slowly and smoothly. After some time passed, I couldn't see his appearance. He stopped his bicycle and waited me. It was a shame to me.
After our riding, I could narrowly come home.
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