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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 08. 19 조회 12696

celebration, gathering, festive, invitation

작성자: 72662 담당 튜터: Cort1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. celebration
- My family members will gather together this Sunday to hold a celebration for my mother's birthday.

2. gathering
- My friend and I used to meet together at a gathering for each birthday party.

3. festive
- This Sunday will be a festive day due to a birthday party.

4. invitation
- My birthday is in the middle of winter so I couldn't give invitation cards to friends when I was little though.
튜터 교정 답변

1. celebration - My family members will gather together this Sunday to hold a celebration for my mother's birthday. 2. gathering - My friend and I used to meet together at a gathering for each birthday party. 3. festive - This Sunday will be a festive day due to a birthday party. 4. invitation - My birthday is in the middle of winter so I couldn't give invitation cards to friends when I was little.

 

Emma,

Good work on these. The only suggestion I have is to cut the word "though" from the end of the 4th sentence.

Best,
Cort

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