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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 08. 20 조회 12244

Stop applying for the scholarship from Korea Foundation for Advanced Studies (2/2)

작성자: pos601974 담당 튜터: JoeM1
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In fact, it is no doubt that I had important opportunity not only to write scholarship and Ph.D. application essays, but also to deeply think of my motivation for applying Ph.D. program and specific areas that I pursue to study and research as preparing for this scholarship. So I thank for the try and appreciate all the help I received from my friends, colleagues, and families during the scholarship application process.

Now, I have to think about where I should head for. Actually I was a bit exhausted while preparing exams and essays. So I’ll recharge my battery well and look for what kind of good options are available to me.
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In fact, it  there is no doubt that I had an important opportunity not only to write both scholarship and Ph.D. application essays, but also to deeply think about of my motivation for applying to the Ph.D. program. and I also thought about the specific areas that I want to pursue for my studies to study and research while as preparing for this scholarship. So I am thankful for the opportunity try and I appreciate all the help I received from my friends, colleagues, and family families during the scholarship application process. Now, I have to think about where I should go from here. head for. Actually I was a bit exhausted while preparing for the exams and essays. So I’ll recharge my battery well and look for what kind of good options are available to me.

 

John - This shows a great attitude and is very well thought out and written.  I just want to say I admire you and I think you have shown a great deal of grace and dignity.  Because of this, I know something good will come your way. Have faith!

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