Cost Reduction
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Title : Cost Reduction
Hello. This is James Lee of Samsung SDS.
I am in charge of contract for service.
Recently, there were some changes in our department.
Service unit has been born newly. So, All of the contract for services are on us.
As for the hardware, kind of servers, storages, switches on me.
It is very hard to say that there is cost reduction issue in the company.
We are willing to reduct about the service contract.
We are studing all of the discount rate of our major partners.
And in personally, I know your effort on the price until now, I don't want to say about the discount, but it can't be helped.
I would like to adjust the difference between the discount rate, and get some more additional discount on the rate.
Hello. This is James Lee of Samsung SDS.
I am in charge of contract for service.
Recently, there were some changes in our department.
Service unit has been born newly. So, All of the contract for services are on us.
As for the hardware, kind of servers, storages, switches on me.
It is very hard to say that there is cost reduction issue in the company.
We are willing to reduct about the service contract.
We are studing all of the discount rate of our major partners.
And in personally, I know your effort on the price until now, I don't want to say about the discount, but it can't be helped.
I would like to adjust the difference between the discount rate, and get some more additional discount on the rate.
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