Watching a Movie
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
The most memorable movie I've watched is "I saw the devil" that is korean movie
This movie is released 5 years ago
but until now
It's most suprising movie ever i seen
It's the story of the detevtive & psycho-path
psypath's muder pattern is killing woman and eat her
and detective's fianc is mudered by him
So Detective find a psycho-path and hit him then release him
and repeat it to enlarge the fear
But the psycho-path attack the detecive's neighbor and kill them
At last detective kill the psycho-path
the story is very simple but the view is very cruial
So it's very Sensional Movie
This movie is released 5 years ago
but until now
It's most suprising movie ever i seen
It's the story of the detevtive & psycho-path
psypath's muder pattern is killing woman and eat her
and detective's fianc is mudered by him
So Detective find a psycho-path and hit him then release him
and repeat it to enlarge the fear
But the psycho-path attack the detecive's neighbor and kill them
At last detective kill the psycho-path
the story is very simple but the view is very cruial
So it's very Sensional Movie
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