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Homewok of unit 5. The differences and similarities between the stereotypes and beliefs

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The stereotypes and beliefs, both are fixed ideas that people have what specific social groups of individuals are like. A stereotypes is an ideas that is wrong, but a belief is an idea that is right. The former is based on prejudices, but the latter is derived from objective facts. The one may affect poeple negatively, but the other may affect people positively. Generally a stereotype can make erroneous judgements.
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The stereotypes and beliefs, both are fixed ideas that people have what about specific social groups of individuals that are alike. A stereotypes is an ideas that is wrong, but a belief is an idea that is right. The former is based on prejudices, but the latter is derived from objective facts. The One may affect people negatively, but the other may affect people positively. Generally a stereotype can make erroneous judgements.

 

Jerry,

 

You did an excellent job with writing the text on stereotypes.  Your point is very straightforward as well as concise and easy to understand.  Your word choices were also outstanding.  I liked the usage of "erroneous judgements." You're well on your way!

Best,

T-Alicia
 

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