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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 08. 25 조회 13432

My personal characteristics and capabilities

작성자: pos601974 담당 튜터: JoeM1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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[Personal characteristics]
- Strength
I find my strength to be patient. I had a difficult time for preparing university entrance exam twice and worked hard in the army as a lieutenant. Those experiences make me strong and patient.
And my father who was a high school teacher has lived a well-organized life. So I learned about diligence naturally from him since I was a child.

- Weakness
I’m not quick and a bit gullible. So I’m trying to make calm judgments in every situation and act properly with promptness.

[Capabilities]
- Strength
I’m good to form a consensus with people by communicating with them and as a result, to solve issues with their supports and cooperation.

- Weakness
Sometimes I miss what people are saying because of lack of understanding. So I often note down important points when they are saying and ask questions if I don’t understand what they are saying.
튜터 교정 답변

[Personal characteristics] - Strength I find my greatest strength to be patience. patient. I had a difficult time for preparing for the university entrance exam twice and worked hard in the army as a lieutenant. Those experiences made make me strong and patient. And my father who was a high school teacher has lived a well-organized life. So I learned about diligence naturally from him since I was a child.      Weakness  My weakness is I’m not quick and I am a bit gullible. So I’m trying to make calm judgments in every situation and act properly with promptness. [Capabilities] - Strength: I’m good at to forming a consensus with people by communicating with them and as a result, solving to solve issues with their supports and cooperation. - Weakness: Sometimes I miss what people are saying because of a lack of understanding. So I often write note down important points when they are saying  talking and ask questions if I don’t understand what they are saying.

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