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How to enjoy your subway trip 1/3

작성자: pos601974 담당 튜터: JoeM1
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Korea subway lines during rush hours are no other the infamous hell trains. I’m commuting by subway for over 2 hours every weekday. So I’m really interested in how to make subway trip relaxed. I will share survival tips in subway with you to laugh and to help you for enjoying your subway ride. Then, think about how to take a seat in the subway first.

Having a seat plays an important role to make the subway trip comfortable. So if it’s possible, then I recommend you to spread your legs so that you can stand up in front of two or more people. See, people usually stand like this – stand before one person. But if you stand between two people and spread your legs like this, then you get potential two seats! Now, you have more options – you will be able to sit down here or there!

Also, it is crucial to pay attention to people sit in front of or around you. If he or she keeps looking around nervously, then it is highly possible for the person to get off in a few minutes!
튜터 교정 답변

Korea subway lines during rush hours are no longer other the infamous hell trains. I’m commuting by subway for over 2 hours every weekday. So I’m really interested in how to make the subway trip relaxed. I will share survival tips on the in subway with you to laugh at and to help you for enjoying your subway ride. Then, think about how to take a seat on in the subway first. Having a seat plays an important role in making to make the subway trip comfortable. So if it’s possible, then I recommend you to spread your legs so that you can stand up in front of two or more people. See, people usually stand like this – stand before one person. But if you stand between two people and spread your legs like this, then you get potentially two seats! Now, you have more options – you will be able to sit down here or there! Also, it is crucial to pay attention to people who sit in front of or around you. If he or she keeps looking around nervously, then it is highly possible for that the person to get off in a few minutes!

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