Earthstory & DDukBBoki
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi Teacher~!
We've talked about the travie schedule application.
Unfortunately this application is not supporting english T_T;;
Anyway..the url is below.
http://www.earthtory.com
And..Actually I promised that I will introduct Ddeokbokki to you.
I pop up about that.
This url introduce it perfectly Please show this clip.
http://lang-8.com/104567/journals/362088
Thank you!
We've talked about the travie schedule application.
Unfortunately this application is not supporting english T_T;;
Anyway..the url is below.
http://www.earthtory.com
And..Actually I promised that I will introduct Ddeokbokki to you.
I pop up about that.
This url introduce it perfectly Please show this clip.
http://lang-8.com/104567/journals/362088
Thank you!
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