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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 09. 02 조회 12952

Earthstory & DDukBBoki

작성자: 1100636672 담당 튜터: Bucci1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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Hi Teacher~!

We've talked about the travie schedule application.

Unfortunately this application is not supporting english T_T;;

Anyway..the url is below.

http://www.earthtory.com

And..Actually I promised that I will introduct Ddeokbokki to you.

I pop up about that.

This url introduce it perfectly Please show this clip.

http://lang-8.com/104567/journals/362088

Thank you!
튜터 교정 답변

Hi Teacher~! We've talked about the travie schedule application. Unfortunately this application is not supporting english T_T;; Anyway..the url is below. http://www.earthtory.com And..Actually I promised that I will introduct Ddeokbokki to you. I pop up about that. This url introduce it perfectly Please show this clip. http://lang-8.com/104567/journals/362088 Thank you!

 

 Hi John!  

Thank you so much for the information I will look at it right away :)

By the way, you can message me about things like this from the website.  You sent me a composition correction which usually means you want me to correct your writing.  Just so you know!  

Thank you again.

~Ashley

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