A letter to my friend who is suffering from offensive commentary over the internet
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Dear Phil,
I am so sorry to hear that there are someone who left malicious comments at your blogs. You must have been quite upset about it. If I were you, I might think of shutting down my blog page. I know it is a easy way to avoid such an offensive comments, but I know it is not the basic idea of Web 2.0. We need to work for building open and positive social media environment. We cannot succeed if we fhight aginst dirty and offensive commentary. It only makes us weak and frustrated.
I am sure that you will not surrender for them and I hope to read new blogs from your homepage.
Best regards,
Dave
I am so sorry to hear that there are someone who left malicious comments at your blogs. You must have been quite upset about it. If I were you, I might think of shutting down my blog page. I know it is a easy way to avoid such an offensive comments, but I know it is not the basic idea of Web 2.0. We need to work for building open and positive social media environment. We cannot succeed if we fhight aginst dirty and offensive commentary. It only makes us weak and frustrated.
I am sure that you will not surrender for them and I hope to read new blogs from your homepage.
Best regards,
Dave
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