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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 09. 04 조회 13187

Reflection on my work attitudes 1/2

작성자: pos601974 담당 튜터: JoeM1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
While I prepared for the scholarship exam, I felt guilty because I have often studied at moments from work. So I spoke to myself that I would do my best at work once I finished the exam. As I look back on my daily work, I found several things that I should change at work to improve my work attitudes and work performances.

The first thing I should change is to keep work hours. I mean, I have to do my best during my business time. I admit that I went to the bathroom, brushed my teeth, stretched my body, and cleaned my cup soon after working hours started at 9 a.m. I know usually we’ve done every personal affair and prepare for working before the business time begins. But I have focused on studying until the work hours start and I did my personal affair such as brushing my teeth, going to a bathroom, and reading a bible during morning business time. I will try to finish every personal affair before I start working.
튜터 교정 답변

While I prepared for the scholarship exam, I felt guilty because I have often studied at moments from work. So I told spoke to myself that I would do my best at work once I finished the exam. As I look back on my daily work, I found several things that I should change at work to improve my work attitudes and work performances. The first thing I should change is to keep strict work hours. I mean, I have to do my best during my business time. I admit that I went to the bathroom, brushed my teeth, stretched my body, and cleaned my cup soon after working hours started at 9 a.m. I know usually we’ve done all every personal things affair and prepare for working before work the business time begins. But I have focused on studying until the work hours start and I did my personal affairs such as brushing my teeth, going to the a bathroom, and reading the a bible during morning business time. I will try to finish every personal affair before I start working.

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