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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 09. 04 조회 12835

Reflection on my work attitudes 2/2

작성자: pos601974 담당 튜터: JoeM1
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Also, I spent over 20 minutes when I left my seat. It is necessary for us to get some air during business hours for refreshing ourselves and cool ourselves down. But I have often gone to the internet room while I leave my office and have searched internet for getting scholarship and exam information. So I will not visit the internet room during working hours as much as possible and just get some air when I leave my seat.

As I mentioned, I should manage my working hours properly and effectively. Moreover, I have to keep right attitudes on my work. It is important to do my best for accumulating expertise on my work and researching to make things better than before. Practice what I have retrospect on my work to be a better worker at the company.
튜터 교정 답변

Also, I spent over 20 minutes away from my desk when I left my seat. It is necessary for us to get some air during business hours for refreshing ourselves and cooling ourselves down. But I have often gone to the internet room when while I leave my office and have searched the internet for getting scholarship and exam information. So I will not visit the internet room during working hours as often much as possible and just get some air when I leave my desk seat. As I mentioned, I should manage my working hours properly and effectively. Moreover, I have to keep a good right attitudes on my at work. It is important to do my best to gain experience at for accumulating expertise on my work and to researching how to make things better than before. I will practice Practice what I have thought about at retrospect on my work and to I will be a better worker for at the company.

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