Please check my sentences grammatically(9.4)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I feel disgusting when I watch some people that dry their dirty point like ass hole by using hair dryer.
I think that eating slowly is a good habit.
In my case, I eat slowly because my father made me do it when I was a kid.
It is good for my health, but sometimes I feel uncomfortable especially when I eat with other people.
Although they finish eating, but i still eat because I eat slowly.
I feel disgusting when I watch some people that say something while filling with foods in mouth.
I think that eating slowly is a good habit.
In my case, I eat slowly because my father made me do it when I was a kid.
It is good for my health, but sometimes I feel uncomfortable especially when I eat with other people.
Although they finish eating, but i still eat because I eat slowly.
I feel disgusting when I watch some people that say something while filling with foods in mouth.
튜터 교정 답변
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