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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 09. 08 조회 13340

performance review

작성자: 1338536 담당 튜터: Madie
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In my company most employees expect an annual performance review.
Language test result will be reflected in the employees' performance review.
The english test result is a mandatory and other languages are optional.
My purposes that I learn Japanese are two things.
I'd like to talk to Japanese engineers fluently and I get the higher grade.
튜터 교정 답변

In our company most employees expect an annual performance review. Language test result will be reflected in the employees' performance review. The english test result is  mandatory and other languages are optional. My purposes why I want to learn Japanese are two things. I'd like to talk to Japanese engineers fluently and to get  a higher grade.

 

Thank you for preparing a script of our day to day topic. correcetions noted are with proper use of pronouns and prepositions,study how to use them in a sentence, thank you!

Teacher Madie

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