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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 09. 14 조회 13600

Responsibility

작성자: 119846 담당 튜터: Joselin1
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If you need to cowork in a team, and the coworkers are tend to care only themselves and don't look around of them. Can you positively work with that kind of people?
And would that kind of team makes some great output? Even with the people who is very eager to do something, it is hard to make some good result.
Sometimes, I think it is very hard to get through this society which is filled with selfish and indifference to the other people or coworkers.
This world is getting more convenient but the spirit of taking care of others is getting disapear.
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If you need to cowork in a team, and the coworkers are tend to care only themselves and don't look around of them. Can you positively work with that kind of people? And would that kind of team makes some great output? Even with the people who is very eager to do something, it is hard to make some good result. Sometimes, I think it is very hard to get through this society which is filled with selfish and indifference to the other people or coworkers. This world is getting more convenient but the spirit of taking care of others is getting disapear.

If you need to work together on a team but your co-workers tend to care only of themselves, can you positively work with these kinds of people? Would this kind of team produce effectively? Even though there are some who are eager to do great things, it his hard to get good results with selfish people. Sometimes, I think it is very hard to get through to this society which is filled with self-centeredness and indifference towards others. The world is becoming more convenient but the spirit of taking care of others is diminishing.

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