Lazy Mr. Won
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
When I transfered to this department, I met Mr. Won.
Age of 50, small height, monkey mouth. Yes, He is my coworker, but my senior.
After my transfer, I got a lot of work to do. Mr.Won devided the works with me, because he is senior.
I worked late at night everyday, but he go home at the right time.
All the things he is interesting, is the going home time.
When the time near to 5 o'clock, he starts to see his smart phone.
Oneday, I asked him, If you have a lot of work to do, what would you do?
He said, I think I don't have to work even past the going home time. I just go to the boss, and tell him to hire more people.
With his respect, I work late everyday. I want to go home at the right time. But I can't.
Because I don't want to be the people who waste their time and have no vocation on their job.
If I also wait the time to go home like Mr.Won left the works behind, there will be another victim.
Age of 50, small height, monkey mouth. Yes, He is my coworker, but my senior.
After my transfer, I got a lot of work to do. Mr.Won devided the works with me, because he is senior.
I worked late at night everyday, but he go home at the right time.
All the things he is interesting, is the going home time.
When the time near to 5 o'clock, he starts to see his smart phone.
Oneday, I asked him, If you have a lot of work to do, what would you do?
He said, I think I don't have to work even past the going home time. I just go to the boss, and tell him to hire more people.
With his respect, I work late everyday. I want to go home at the right time. But I can't.
Because I don't want to be the people who waste their time and have no vocation on their job.
If I also wait the time to go home like Mr.Won left the works behind, there will be another victim.
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