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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 09. 22 조회 13340

I am very energitic person

작성자: HDP140303 담당 튜터: Paula
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Last class I attended a important meeting.
So I didnt attend my class.
So I prepare to study today's class .
Theseday I am very busy because korean traditional holiday "chooseok"is comming.
So I have to visit my clients and give the present.
But I have exercised swimming because I want to be a lifeguard.
튜터 교정 답변

Last class I attended a important meeting. -> Last class, I attended an important meeting.

So I didnt attend my class. -> That's why I didn't attend my class.

So I prepare to study today's class. -> I studied the lesson for this class.

Theseday I am very busy because korean traditional holiday "chooseok"is comming. -> I'm very busy these days because korean traditional holiday "chooseok"is comming.

So I have to visit my clients and give the present. -> I have to visit my clients and give them presents.

But I have exercised swimming because I want to be a lifeguard. -> I also practiced swimming because I want to be a lifeguard.

 

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