Friends get together
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Today, Colleagues of university are get together. At the start of this year, I made a connection by using a SNS. At the first time, the reaction from the old friends was great. Becuase everyone was anxious to hear friends news. I gethered the old contact from my old mailbox, and send a mail to friends to join a SNS. Most of the contacts was valid, and many of them send a message back to me.
Anyway we had get together two times already, and today is the third. Feedbacks for join the party was less than the first get together but I expect over 10 would be participated in. I arranged korean style babeque restaurant placed in Sa-Dang. The restaurant is the same as the place we made the first get together. We'll meet at 7 pm. Now it's 1 pm, but I can't wait until 7 alreay.
Anyway we had get together two times already, and today is the third. Feedbacks for join the party was less than the first get together but I expect over 10 would be participated in. I arranged korean style babeque restaurant placed in Sa-Dang. The restaurant is the same as the place we made the first get together. We'll meet at 7 pm. Now it's 1 pm, but I can't wait until 7 alreay.
튜터 교정 답변
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