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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 09. 24 조회 13366

After getting together

작성자: 119846 담당 튜터: Joselin1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
After getting together, the hang over still continue.
I am very tired today, but the works to be done is piling up.
My friends looked like enjoying our meeting.
We have talked a lot, laughed a lot, and drank a lot.
Sometimes we teased eachother, and congratulated who would be deserve.
As expected, meeting with old friends is something relaxible.
Yesterday, we arranged another meeting next month already. It's a camping!
튜터 교정 답변

After getting together, the hang over still continue. I am very tired today, but the works to be done is piling up. My friends looked like enjoying our meeting. We have talked a lot, laughed a lot, and drank a lot. Sometimes we teased eachother, and congratulated who would be deserve. As expected, meeting with old friends is something relaxible. Yesterday, we arranged another meeting next month already. It's a camping!

After getting together, the hangover lingered. I am very tired today but work to be done is piling up. My friends seemed to enjoy the meeting. We talked a lot, laughed a lot and drank a lot. Sometimes, we teased eachother and congratulated eachother. As expected, meeting with old friends is relaxing. Yesterday, we arranged another meeting for next month - camping!

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