My job.
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학생 제출 원문
Hi. How are you?
I fully enjoyed long weekend and had a enough rest.
I am going to explain my job today.
I guess that you might miss my explanation due to my wrong pronunciation.
I have been working for my company since 2000.
My company is Hanwha Advanced Materials and it is one of the Hanwha Group.
The Hanwha Griup is one of the largest conglomerate in Korea.
My company manufactures advanced material like as automotive plastic parts and electrics parts.
And it has six subsidiaries worldwide such as USA, China, Europe.
And I am in charge of managing those subsidaries in various way.
I report sales and profit statement to top mmanagement instead of that subsidiarues.
And I deliver orders of management to them.
I sometimes go there on business trip to report their details.
So I must improve my English speech to communicate with them efficiently.
I fully enjoyed long weekend and had a enough rest.
I am going to explain my job today.
I guess that you might miss my explanation due to my wrong pronunciation.
I have been working for my company since 2000.
My company is Hanwha Advanced Materials and it is one of the Hanwha Group.
The Hanwha Griup is one of the largest conglomerate in Korea.
My company manufactures advanced material like as automotive plastic parts and electrics parts.
And it has six subsidiaries worldwide such as USA, China, Europe.
And I am in charge of managing those subsidaries in various way.
I report sales and profit statement to top mmanagement instead of that subsidiarues.
And I deliver orders of management to them.
I sometimes go there on business trip to report their details.
So I must improve my English speech to communicate with them efficiently.
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