about travel
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I din't like to travel a few years ago. Someday, my wife asked me to travel anywhere by airplane. In my mind, I wanted to say like "If we go to travel by airplane, we will ran out of budget of this month. I think it's the best to let sleeping dogs lie" but I count't say that because it definitely would disappoint my wife. I had a idea. I thout Jeju island is the best place to travel with low cost. So I asked her "When is the best time to travel to Jeju island" She said "Right now",
After coming back home from Jeju island, I changed my mind. I felt that I would love again stronger than before
After coming back home from Jeju island, I changed my mind. I felt that I would love again stronger than before
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