Self Introduction

I was born and grew up in south korea. 10 years ago, I've married, so I have a wife and a daughter. I'm living in Yongin city which is 20 miles far from the capital city of South Korea, Seoul. I'm working in ICT company similar with IBM or HP. The company which I'm working in is located in the heart of Seoul city. Company's major client is like Samsung Electronics or Samsung SDI and more that mostly earn multibillion dollors each year. In fact the company's client is only limited in Samsung family company. And the company provides IT services such as implementing corporate IT system or consulting working processes which can be used when IT systems implemented. In that company, I'm particularly working in consulting division. My major role in the company is suggesting process recommendations and providing best-in-class company's practices, so that IT systems can help not only corporate efficiency but also corporate performance.

Hi John -- We'll review this paragraph together, as there are several important grammatical principles I would like to point out to you :)