The story I was tring to speak but I couldn't
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학생 제출 원문
Today, On the phone, I couldn't speak during first few seconds,
I was finding somewhere quiet to speak.
Because At that time I was in office and it was lunch time.
In lunch time, most of people take a nap
so, I don't want to disturb them.
By the way, I've worked for hanwha techwin just for about 3 months.
Before this company, I had worked for samsung techwin for 10 years.
but my company was merged with hanwha group on july this year.
so, my company name was changed to hanwha techwin.
And after the ages of 40, I recognize that I need some exercise
I like soccer and basketball, but It's difficult to find people who
want to play and get together and I'm afraid that i get hurt during exercise.
so, I prefer marathon, because I don't have to worry about injury
and arrange the time to play with other guys.
I usually jog by the riverside.
I prefer reiverside to gym
while gym feels stuffy, riverside provide fresh air.
I was finding somewhere quiet to speak.
Because At that time I was in office and it was lunch time.
In lunch time, most of people take a nap
so, I don't want to disturb them.
By the way, I've worked for hanwha techwin just for about 3 months.
Before this company, I had worked for samsung techwin for 10 years.
but my company was merged with hanwha group on july this year.
so, my company name was changed to hanwha techwin.
And after the ages of 40, I recognize that I need some exercise
I like soccer and basketball, but It's difficult to find people who
want to play and get together and I'm afraid that i get hurt during exercise.
so, I prefer marathon, because I don't have to worry about injury
and arrange the time to play with other guys.
I usually jog by the riverside.
I prefer reiverside to gym
while gym feels stuffy, riverside provide fresh air.
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