What is one great contribution that my contry made to the world?
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
When any countries suffer a disaster we send doctors, firefighters and volunteers to help people. They went to help China Sichuan earthquake, Nepal earthquake, Indonesia tsunami etc. Also we coutributed for Japan tsunami. The nuclear plant was collapsed by tsunami and it was terrible accident.
튜터 교정 답변
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