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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 10. 05 조회 13380

Letter to my friend

작성자: 1102107996 담당 튜터: Jerry1
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Dear my friend

I heard that you are sufferring from offensive commentary over the internet. As I had gone through the same situation, I know the pain you have now. What I want to tell you is "Never mind". Thouse kind of commentaries are just come from the cowards who can't talk to you face to face. If you can not let it go, go to law-enforcement office. They'll give you a perfect solution.
I hope you get better from the pain.
튜터 교정 답변

Dear friend, I heard that you are sufferring from offensive commentary over the internet. As I have experienced the same situation, so I know the pain you feel now. Never mind the commentaries that would be my advice for you. Those kind of commentaries typicallycome from cowards who hide behind their computers and cannot talk to you face to face. Please try as much to let it go but if it persisits, i advice to go to law-enforcement. That would be the right solution. I hope this makes you feel better.

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