when do you start a swimming?
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I started a swimming 3 years ago
but last year I began to swimming in earnest
and This may I got a life guard license
And I got a cpr , first aid license, as expert level
As I said you i go to swimming pool every weekend
To practics a rescue swimming and exercise.
And last month I particifated in a swimming compettion in Daegu
It was very awesome experience to me and i will improve My swimming skills
but last year I began to swimming in earnest
and This may I got a life guard license
And I got a cpr , first aid license, as expert level
As I said you i go to swimming pool every weekend
To practics a rescue swimming and exercise.
And last month I particifated in a swimming compettion in Daegu
It was very awesome experience to me and i will improve My swimming skills
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