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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 10. 05 조회 11778

Last weekend

작성자: HLCC200010815 담당 튜터: Douglas2
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My wife's relatives visited my home last weekend. We didn't see them for a long time.
We were so happy to see them and had a wonderful time.
We talked about various topics regarding each falmilies' life with having beer in the night.
We hung out around neighborhood and took a picture so many times.
We watched recent movies and had a nice lunch in the fancy restaurant.
They stayed our home for two nights. but it was so short time for us to enjoy more things.
Anyhow,it was a really nice weekend.
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My wife's relatives visited my home last weekend.  We haven't seen them for a long time, and were so happy; we had a wonderful time.  We talked about each other's lives while drinking beer, hung around the neighborhood, took many pictures, watched newly released movies, and had a nice lunch at a fancy restaurant. They stayed at our home for two nights, but it felt like such a short time and we wanted more time to do more things.  It was a really nice weekend.

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