Reading newspaper3
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Last week on the way to home on the smartphone, I read one article about a green park event. It was really amazing. In the park near my house is going to giving free recycle bag, because there are full of garbages that the vistors throw it away in the park. So that visitor who are willing to visit the park has to have recycling bag for their garbage, if they didn't have it, it's not allowed to enter the park. So, eventually the park became really clean place and it's rellay lovely place where everyone like. I think the decision of the park office's is very good idea and recommendable. I hope other park has same practice like this.
튜터 교정 답변
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