community event
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I’d like to talk about community between the past and now
Before, there weren’t many community events. I think at that time, many communities couldn’t get enough financial supports.
But now, you can see many community events with government support and local’s participation. So communities are revitalized and events are one of them.
I think communities are getting more and more wealthy
Before, there weren’t many community events. I think at that time, many communities couldn’t get enough financial supports.
But now, you can see many community events with government support and local’s participation. So communities are revitalized and events are one of them.
I think communities are getting more and more wealthy
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