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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 10. 07 조회 13254

Is there a gym in your company?

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Of course, there is a gym in my company.
Many employees use that gym in the morning before the work, in the lunch time, and in the evening after the work.
But I don't use that place.
It is a little bit inconvenient to exercise with acquaintances.
My company support a welfare program that name is well-being club.
There are many gyms in many areas belong to well-bing club.
Employees using tha program pay using fees to company,
then people can select the gym near there house or in a convenient place.
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Of course, there is a gym in my company. Many employees use that gym in the morning before they work, during lunch time, and in the evening after  work. But I don't use that place. It is a little bit inconvenient to exercise with acquaintances. My company support a welfare program that name is well-being club. There are many gyms in many areas that belongs to well-being club. Employees using the program pay using fees to company, then people can select the gym near there house or in a convenient place.

 

In your script there were only a few corrections.Its about proper use of prepositions.Nevertheless your script is good and ideas are very consistent.

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