Unit 14
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My job is business analyst for implementing IT system on the client's company. The core competency of the job is analyzing client's business process and researching information in order to make better recommendations. About the competency, I think I fortunately alread have had. I like surverying or collectting informations and orgarnizing information. In that point of view, I think my job is matching me.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!