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I think we shouldn't allow illegal immigrants.
Korean citizenship is based on equal banlance of the rights and duties. But illegal immigrants are out of duties and just want to get the rights. They don't serve in the army and pays no taxes for their incomes. Who doesn't do their duties has no rights to stay in Korea.
Korean citizenship is based on equal banlance of the rights and duties. But illegal immigrants are out of duties and just want to get the rights. They don't serve in the army and pays no taxes for their incomes. Who doesn't do their duties has no rights to stay in Korea.
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