UNIT 12 my answer
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Question 6.
I go to karaoke for several reasons.
First, I think it is a good place to relieve my stress from daily life.
Secondly, I can sing loudly there. Actually I can not sing loudly at home because of my neighbors. So I can enjoy singing at karaoke without any disturbance.
For these reasons I go to karaoke.
I go to karaoke for several reasons.
First, I think it is a good place to relieve my stress from daily life.
Secondly, I can sing loudly there. Actually I can not sing loudly at home because of my neighbors. So I can enjoy singing at karaoke without any disturbance.
For these reasons I go to karaoke.
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