cooking (I want to change as a american style english belows
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I like all kinds of Korean food, such as tokbbokgi, noddles, sundae, pajeon and so on. Among them I like to cook pajeon. pajeon is a Korean traditional food and it is a health food made of vegetables.
So, Korean eat pajeon especially on holidays because it’s very easy to make.
To make pajeon, Firstly you have to prepare ingredients such as onions, carrots, seafood, pumpkin, pepper, hot source, mushroom, flour and so on. Next you need to make dough. Then mix them well. Lastly, panfry them together.
That’s all. And Enjoy your pajeon!
So, Korean eat pajeon especially on holidays because it’s very easy to make.
To make pajeon, Firstly you have to prepare ingredients such as onions, carrots, seafood, pumpkin, pepper, hot source, mushroom, flour and so on. Next you need to make dough. Then mix them well. Lastly, panfry them together.
That’s all. And Enjoy your pajeon!
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