shopping
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When I go grocery shopping, I buy many things such as snacks, vegetables, meat, milks and so on.
And I usually go to the shopping called world market. It is located near Seoul station. And it takes about 30 minutes from my apartment. And I usually go there by my car.
There, you can see many things. There are people waiting, buying, shopping. And also there are many tables, refrigerator, products and so on.
It is also close from my apartment and it’s the most famous grocery market in my neighborhood.
And near world market, there are many facilities such as restaurants, cafes, and convenient store.
And so you can go there easily because it is a free parking lot
I think the world market always is clean, safe, well-maintained.
So, I’d like to recommend strongly
And I usually go to the shopping called world market. It is located near Seoul station. And it takes about 30 minutes from my apartment. And I usually go there by my car.
There, you can see many things. There are people waiting, buying, shopping. And also there are many tables, refrigerator, products and so on.
It is also close from my apartment and it’s the most famous grocery market in my neighborhood.
And near world market, there are many facilities such as restaurants, cafes, and convenient store.
And so you can go there easily because it is a free parking lot
I think the world market always is clean, safe, well-maintained.
So, I’d like to recommend strongly
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