go to sea beach
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I usually go to beach called east sea beach in Korea. It is located near world station
Maybe, it takes about 4 hours from my apartment and I usually go there by my car
There, I can see many things. There are people swimming, jogging, walking the dog, sun turning. Also, there are many tubes, parasol, ships and so on.
It is close to my co-worker’s apartment and it’s the most famous beach in Korea
And Near the beach, there are many facilities such as restaurants, cafes and convenient store. And also you can go there easily because there is a free parking lot
I think the east sea beach is always safe, clean and well-maintained.
So, I’d like to strongly recommend there.
Maybe, it takes about 4 hours from my apartment and I usually go there by my car
There, I can see many things. There are people swimming, jogging, walking the dog, sun turning. Also, there are many tubes, parasol, ships and so on.
It is close to my co-worker’s apartment and it’s the most famous beach in Korea
And Near the beach, there are many facilities such as restaurants, cafes and convenient store. And also you can go there easily because there is a free parking lot
I think the east sea beach is always safe, clean and well-maintained.
So, I’d like to strongly recommend there.
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