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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 10. 14 조회 12086

Thank you for correction.

작성자: 74108 담당 튜터: Angela1
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Dear Angella

Thank you for the correction.
I totally understand and agree your correction that I have a lot of gramatical errors.
It's a little hard to make perfect sentences.
There's no way to get a good English skills unless I don't study hard.

Have a nice, nice, nice~ day and talk to tomorrow.
Bye!


Sincerely, Tim
튜터 교정 답변

Dear Angella

Thank you for the correction. I totally understand and agree your correction that I have a lot of gramatical errors. It's a little hard to make perfect sentences. There's no way to get a good English skills unless I don't study hard. Have a nice, nice, nice~ day and talk to tomorrow. Bye! Sincerely, Tim

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Hello Tim!

Good day! 

Anyway, thanks for the message. When you have grammatical error, it's alright. We all make mistakes. It's no big deal.So do I, I even have grammar errors.The good thing is you tried.It is better than not tring. I really appreciate your hard work. And I don't wanna put more pressure on you because you are too busy. Actually, I am so impressed with you because you are good in managing yourself in handling time, Keep up the good work.  

Thanks for your wonderful effort :) 

Have a wonderful day!

~Angela

I have some corrections you below. 

Dear Angela,

Thank you for the correction. I totally understand and agree with your correction that since/ because I have a lot of gramatical errors. It's a little hard to make perfect sentences. There's no way to get a good English skills unless I don't study hard. Have a nice, nice, nice~ day and talk to tomorrow.

Bye!

Sincerely, Tim

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