raality show
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I’d like to talk about reality show on TV between the past and now
Uhm, well I thin people’s attitude have changed a lot. and my favorite TV program is a reality show called “Real Man” which reminds me of the memory my young age by indirect experiencing army life.
Before people couldn’t see a reality show on TV because they were busy in their workplaces and it ‘not fun actually.
But these days, most people say that reality show can give a fun something like “Real Man”. And also they can give you vicarious satisfaction and useful information.’
In my view, they can release your stress. It’s worthy~~
Uhm, well I thin people’s attitude have changed a lot. and my favorite TV program is a reality show called “Real Man” which reminds me of the memory my young age by indirect experiencing army life.
Before people couldn’t see a reality show on TV because they were busy in their workplaces and it ‘not fun actually.
But these days, most people say that reality show can give a fun something like “Real Man”. And also they can give you vicarious satisfaction and useful information.’
In my view, they can release your stress. It’s worthy~~
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