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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 10. 19 조회 13940

recycling

작성자: 1101969850 담당 튜터: Ana
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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’d like to talk about recycling between the past and now.
Before, actually people didn’t recycle at all. At that time, I think they didn’t have awareness of recycling. Also they didn’t care because environment pollution was not that serious.
Now, recycling became a routine of my daily life. people recycle every day for environment such as cans, bottles, papers, plastics and so on. And you can also see many bins. Besides, Korean government applies strict rules on recycling.
These are my opinions about recycling
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I'd like to talk about recycling between the past and now. Before, actually people didn’t do recycling at all. At that time, I think they didn’t have awareness on how to recycle. Also they didn’t care because environment pollution was not that serious. Now, recycling became a routine of my daily life. People recycle every day for environment such as cans, bottles, papers, plastics and so on. And you can also see many bins. Besides, Korean government applies strict rules on recycling. These are my opinions about recycling.

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